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Pool Party Ahri Fan-Art

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Phheewwwww, finally got this thing done, hahaha. I progressed quite alot from the WIP i posted ages ago, but i REALLLYYYYY wanted to finish this, and HA, THAT'S RIGHT WORLD, I DUN FINISHED IT. :P
I really want a pool party ahri, and lets be real, it should be a bikini but we know riot can have that happen haha, I have a few other artworks i want to do, Pool Party Fizz, Kayle and Yorick, also a few more i won't let on about yet ;)


Ahri belongs to Riot Games, not myself.

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First off two things you should know before reading this critigue:

1. I am unfamiliar with the character.

2. I will be giving some technical advice, that may or may not lend itself to your style. So if you feel that the advice is going against what you are trying to acheive, do not take it.

As anotther critque suggested your anatomy and color are pretty good. The face looks alittl. "Hard" to me. I think it could be a bit softer, and could use a little more shape. I think sometimes the classic anime pointed chin feels sacred, but i personally dont feel its the best choice for this manga-fusion style art.

My main critisism is i think you have the shading in an awkerd place. It either needs one more level of darks on thee figure, or not be taken as dark as it has. The tails (i am assuming) have the same level of shadow as the figure, i think they should lighter to work with the atmosphere of white background. I see some orange hus in the background, and appreciate them, but i do not see this color included in the lights of the subject. You may want to research color washing, and using color balance if you work in photoshop.

I think you composition works, i do feel the surreal orange field on the right is out of balance with the left tho.

Now for dessert: the pose is strong, the highlights are well placed, and the emotion translates. She is effectively "hot" so that was achieved with the peice.

I hope this helps, overall great piece.